Score: 9

"Great work"

submission: Bytesize Volume One

date: July 13, 2008

Your animation always amazes me. I love your drawing style and the smooth animation in all of your cartoons. I was curious how the surfboard stayed up without him holding it, but besides that the animation was very smooth and crisp. I really laughed at the "Office Space" reference in the first short showing the building name as "Initech". Keep up the great work.

Score: 8

"Not a bad concept..."

submission: Zombie Teaches Typing

date: March 28, 2008

I like the idea of it, but you can't have a bunch of random letters show up and THEN show a word to type. The letters tend to scroll fast for being completely random. I'm normally a fast typer, but it seemed a little odd typing a bunch of random letters than jumping anywhere from a small word to a larger word. Perhaps setup different difficulty levels, each level has it's own length of words and number of zombies. Also incorporating actual typing lessons like using "home row" would be a great way to help people out. Overall I think you have a pretty original and nice concept it just has a few things that need to be worked out.

Score: 9

"It was good..."

submission: Operation Infiltration

date: December 31, 2007

It really did capture the worms style really good. You have a great talent you should really try to draw something truely amazing. You need to be noticed, but doing small animations like a worms parody and a stick movie may not reach out to the best audiences.

Score: 10

"Pretty simple, well executed"

submission: Crossing the Pit

date: December 17, 2007

Pretty simple concept, the lines and shapes were pretty crisp and well drawn. I found myself laughing are them since the it was well executed. I normally don't like stick figure animations, but this was really good. Keep up the good work and good luck animating.

Score: 9

"Well..."

submission: Super Street Brother p.3

date: November 25, 2007

It was pretty good, but the only problem I have with it was that you said Akuma caused World War I and then show a picture of Hitler who actually wasn't a main problem really until World War II. Just saying referencing history is nice and all, but the facts need to be 100% straight. Otherwise really good.

Score: 4

"I'm sorry..."

submission: Moses' Journey

date: October 5, 2007

I just found this offensive and yes I do know the story of Moses and have heard it many times. The animation wasn't that great, but the voice acting was funny which made up for it (almost). Right now I would say try to lay off the religion humor so much and work on different types of jokes because I don't think the majority of NG will think "Holy macoroni!" is all that funny. Good luck with flash!-hypeserver

Score: 8

"Good animation"

submission: Clayground - Actually

date: October 5, 2007

The animation was really good I think that you may need to spend a little more time on a storyline though since you started off with one plot and ended up with something completely different and random. As for voice acting I would work on that as well the voiceactor(s) didn't seem to confident in their lines and it made the audio sound boring and very slow going. Good luck with your future animations, keep up the good work!-hypeserver

Score: 8

"Didn't you just..."

submission: Slim Bits 1

date: October 4, 2007

Didn't you just support this yesterday? I like it, but I can't tell what the difference is.

Score: 1

"Well..."

submission: Terrorists in space

date: July 23, 2007

I don't mean to be that negative or anything, but the animation and concept weren't good. It worked in South Park by killing off Kenny every episode because it was original. I would try working on a more original concept and improving on your graphics.

Score: 1

"Bugs"

submission: The Avoider

date: July 23, 2007

You can just right click for the flash menu (play, rewind, skip) since you didn't disable that and beat the game in a few seconds. You should try fixing that otherwise pretty good, but not really original.