Not bad

The game is not entirely bad, however I do have some pointers. After the song cycles through and plays once it takes a bit of time to start looping again. Personally I would shorten the loop gap so the music is more consistent. Looking at the actual flash the graphics are pretty well done, but the proportions are a tad off. The hairstyles don't exactly fit the head and the eyes are not at the same angle as the face. The actual size of the flash is, for some reason, not being entirely displayed. In the web browser, your flash seems pushed to the right and in widescreen. This issue makes it difficult to see the entire content of your game. Besides those few issues I'd say you did a good job on the game. Keep up the good work.

Great graphics, Iffy Storyline

The game's graphics were really well done, but the storyline disappointed me a little bit. The story took some elements from Indiana Jones, but I understand what you were trying to do. The game is pretty good overall, but I would suggest trying to tune the responsiveness of the mouse aiming. The game seemed to have a hard time picking up my trackpad mouse on a laptop. When it did pick it up, it resulted in very hard aiming controls that didn't seem to be entirely fine tuned.

Very Buggy

The concept alone is a little disturbing, but I can still find the humor in it. Unfortunately, I came across so many ads and bugs that the game is almost unplayable. At one point I had to refresh the page and reload the game due to a glitch in an ad. After the ad loader, I wasn't able to return to the game. I understand trying to make a profit off of your flashes, but this just seems like somewhat of a scam more than anything else. It especially seems like a scam due to the current almost unplayable state of the flash file.

awesome

This is one of the best songs on Newgrounds I ever heard feel free to check out my music it's not as good as yours, but still decent.

hey

hey that's an awesome beat please check out and review my stuff. I like yours better than mine though lol I know 'Ultra Trance' sounds scratchy, but it's meant to be like that

great song

this is a great mix and should diserve an award :)

A little work on shading and lighting

The main problem I have with the picture is that the glasses don't appear to line up with the eyes. The other issue I have is the lighting on her right shoulder (left when viewing the portrait). The light in the rest of the picture seems to be coming from the right hand side, but on this shoulder it's hard to distinguish where the light is coming from.

To me, it just doesn't seem entirely like a finished piece of work. I really do appreciate the art, but the shading and light source are kind of throwing me off. Keep up the good work though, you really are a talented artist.