I have to admit I really loved this short. It was really well written, nice animation style, and well voice acted.
Your animation always amazes me. I love your drawing style and the smooth animation in all of your cartoons. I was curious how the surfboard stayed up without him holding it, but besides that the animation was very smooth and crisp. I really laughed at the "Office Space" reference in the first short showing the building name as "Initech". Keep up the great work.
dammit everybody notices the surf board.....
It was good...
It really did capture the worms style really good. You have a great talent you should really try to draw something truely amazing. You need to be noticed, but doing small animations like a worms parody and a stick movie may not reach out to the best audiences.
The game is not entirely bad, however I do have some pointers. After the song cycles through and plays once it takes a bit of time to start looping again. Personally I would shorten the loop gap so the music is more consistent. Looking at the actual flash the graphics are pretty well done, but the proportions are a tad off. The hairstyles don't exactly fit the head and the eyes are not at the same angle as the face. The actual size of the flash is, for some reason, not being entirely displayed. In the web browser, your flash seems pushed to the right and in widescreen. This issue makes it difficult to see the entire content of your game. Besides those few issues I'd say you did a good job on the game. Keep up the good work.
with the sons i couldn't figure out how to make it more consistent so absolutly agree!
the size of the flash is weirdly shaped and that is also because of my ignorance of not knowing how to complete work the programme -.-
thankzs uuu for the advice ^^
Great graphics, Iffy Storyline
The game's graphics were really well done, but the storyline disappointed me a little bit. The story took some elements from Indiana Jones, but I understand what you were trying to do. The game is pretty good overall, but I would suggest trying to tune the responsiveness of the mouse aiming. The game seemed to have a hard time picking up my trackpad mouse on a laptop. When it did pick it up, it resulted in very hard aiming controls that didn't seem to be entirely fine tuned.
The concept alone is a little disturbing, but I can still find the humor in it. Unfortunately, I came across so many ads and bugs that the game is almost unplayable. At one point I had to refresh the page and reload the game due to a glitch in an ad. After the ad loader, I wasn't able to return to the game. I understand trying to make a profit off of your flashes, but this just seems like somewhat of a scam more than anything else. It especially seems like a scam due to the current almost unplayable state of the flash file.
I have update with no ads version 8 hours ago, but didnt get updated by NG staff :(, sorry for that
This is one of the best songs on Newgrounds I ever heard feel free to check out my music it's not as good as yours, but still decent.
wow, i have never gotten a compliment like that. ill check you out now.
hey that's an awesome beat please check out and review my stuff. I like yours better than mine though lol I know 'Ultra Trance' sounds scratchy, but it's meant to be like that
this is a great mix and should diserve an award :)
wow, lol to be honest i was just messing around, but thanks
A little work on shading and lighting
The main problem I have with the picture is that the glasses don't appear to line up with the eyes. The other issue I have is the lighting on her right shoulder (left when viewing the portrait). The light in the rest of the picture seems to be coming from the right hand side, but on this shoulder it's hard to distinguish where the light is coming from.
To me, it just doesn't seem entirely like a finished piece of work. I really do appreciate the art, but the shading and light source are kind of throwing me off. Keep up the good work though, you really are a talented artist.
Why thanx, I'll work on that c:
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